FANFICTION : The Cruel Killer

Casts:

- Evanna Lynch as Bella Anderson (Henry’s wife)

- Evanna Lynch as Victoria  Anderson (Bella’s twin sister)

- Josh Hutcherson as Henry (Bella’s husband)

- Douglas Booth as Alexander (Henry’s colleague)

- Jennifer Stone as Angela (Bella’s friend and Henry’s colleague)

- Dave Franco as Kris (Henry’s brother)

- Rachel Hurd Wood as Inspector Catrina (CID forensic scientist)

- Xavier Samuel as Inspector Bryan (CID Detective)

SCENE 1

Bella and Henry is a married couple. They were love each other. Lately, their relationship is often problematic. Sometimes, they will fight each other and each of them hard to succumb. Before this, even they have a problem, at the end; they will solve the problems together.

One day, Bella and Henry planned to have dinner together. It’s not worth to have fight. But, unfortunately, Henry forgets about his promise with his wife. He was very busy at the workplace.

“Why you didn't come for our dinner last night? I've been waiting for you”. Ask Bella, in disappointment.

“I’m really sorry; I really busy last night….I got stress with my own work”. Henry tries to explain.

“Hah, It just an excuse to hide something from me, right? I know you’ve dinner with that girl”.

“Who? Please, stop nonsense, Bella!! I don’t want to have fight with you”

“I know you’ve feeling towards your office assistant”

“No!! I'm not!! What’s wrong with you?”

“I saw the latter, I saw her email....”

“I’m tired. Don’t discuss about this”

“Wait, Henry….where are you going?”

Henry and Bella were fighting again on that day. Henry decided to stay at his office and do not back to home for a day.

SCENE 2

One day, something happened to Henry…

Angela who is Henry’s colleague, found Henry's dead body in the empty room at the office. Henry’s body is full of blood especially on his chest. He was stab by someone for more times. His stomach is perforated, his mouth and nose also bleeding and his head was bump on the wall. He died in tragic murderer. It is very frightening, Angela immediately reported to the police.

“When you found the dead body?”. Inspector Bryan asked.

“Just now, I was really shock and I call police quickly…”. Angela is still in shock expression.

“I think someone has put this body here but he is not dead at this place”. Explained by Inspector Catrina, who is a forensic scientist for CID.

“We must find the real place of the incident immediately. Inspector Catrina, help me to find out more information and detail about him”. Inspector Bryan makes an order.

“Ok….Inspector..”

SCENE 3

Then, they bring Henry's dead body to the autopsy lab and start their investigation about the case.

“The killer is quite smart. We still can’t find out any evidence at the crime scene”. Inspector Bryan managed some file while he still looking for Henry’s details.

“How about the real place of incident?”. Inspector Catrina asked for sure.

“Search and rescue teams have managed to discover the real place of the incident. The victims were killed in an older building that is adjacent to the company’s building”

“What is the real motive of murder?”

“I'm not able to confirm it yet. I'm still investigating and gathering information about the victim's families”.

“Do your best Mr. Bryan….”. Inspector Catrina tried to give words of encouragement.

“You too….Oh yeah, I should go back to the crime scene to get what else they have found”

“Okay…I have to finish the autopsy report”

SCENE 4

Inspector Bryan go head towards the crime scene and at the same time, Alexander who is Henry’s colleague also there.

“Angela, what's wrong here? What actually happened? Why there is so many police inside there?”. Several questions raised by Alex.

“Don't you know what recently happen to Henry? He already died. I found his dead body. He was killed by someone”. Angela tries to explain.

“WHAT??!!! He died?? But, last night, I heard he talk with someone and they are talking about an issue”

“What? There are fighting?”

“I’m not so sure, I return home late last night and I heard about it. But I don't know who’s that person, seems like a woman…I just thought they are just discussing about their privacy so I just leave them”

“I think that person must be the suspect”. Angela starts to wonder.

A few minutes then, Inspector Bryan comes towards them.

“May I know, there is anyone of you who close with Henry?”

“I rarely communicate with him except for official business”. Alex answered short.

“I’m his friend……”. Angela raised her hand.

“I want to ask you about his current address. I got his detail but the address is no longer hir current address.”

“Oh, I will give you his parents' home address”

SCENE 5

On the next day, the CID decided to go to Henry's house for getting more information about him.

“Hello? Anyone at home?”. Inspector Catrina knock the door.

Suddenly, someone slowly opened the door. It was Kris. He is Henry's brother.

“Yes? May I help you? Anything you needs?”. Kris asked them curiously.

“We’re from Criminal Investigation Department. I’m Inspector Catrina and this is Inspector Bryan. May I ask, did you know Henry Thomson?

“Yes? I’m his brother. Why did you come here? Did my brother was in prison?

“No, we just now to inform that your brother was found die yesterday”

“What??? What nonsense are you talking about?” Why you are telling me right now?”

“Please be patient Mr. Sorry for the late, it is quite difficult to get his current information”. Inspector Catrina tries to make him calm down.

“Then, where is him now?”

“We are still doing the autopsy on him to find the cause of death and the evidence of murder”

“Murder? it is a murder case?”

“Yes Mr. ..But don’t worry we will do our best to make investigation on this case”

“Can we ask permission from you to make a check on his room to get any clues?”. Inspector Bryan gives a warrant of search permission to Kris.

“Ok… just come in…”. Kris briefly answered.

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After checking Henry's room, Inspector Bryan found the picture of Bella inside his room.

“Who’s person in this picture?”. Ask Inspector Bryan.

“She is his wife….but I don’t know where she lives now. After they get married, Henry and his wife left us because our parents did not bless their marriage”

“Can we get more other information about this woman…did you really don't know where is her? Are you sure?”. Inspector Catrina start to be so curious about the woman.

“I really don’t know and never meet with her before”

“Inspector Catrina, I think we need to find his friends and asking them about this woman”

“Okay…”

“Mister….thanks for your corporation, I hope, after this news came to your parents, you and your family can be patient and persevere with what happened”. Inspector Bryan touches Kris's shoulder while he tried to calm him down.

“Thank you Sir…. anything news about this case, please inform me directly”

“Ok….I will….”

SCENE 6

Inspector Bryan and Inspector Catrina go to meet with Angela for asking her about the woman in the photo.

“Did you know women in this picture?”. Inspector Catrina showing the photo to Angela.

“Yes…I know. She is my friend… Bella..”

“What is her relationship with Henry?”

“Hmm friend, yeah, they just a friend…”. Angela answered hesitantly.

“Are you sure? They don’t have any special relationship? Or he don’t have any problem with this woman?”. Inspector Bryan still asks her.

“I’m sure…and Henry also never had any enemy since I know him”

“Okay, you just give us an opposite statement from what information that we get. I’m still curious. Did you really don’t know about their relationship?”. Inspector Catrina still insist with a same question, to know the truth.

“Yes, that is all what I know about them”. Angela still with her same answer.

“You don’t even know they are actually a married couple?”. Asked Inspector Bryan.

Angela stays quiet for a while before she continues her answer.

“Yes…..I really don’t know about that”.

“We hope for your corporation. Any information about Bella and Henry, please inform us”. Inspector Bryan finally put an end to the question.

“Okay Sir….”. Angela nodded his head.

SCENE 7

Next day, Angela meets with Bella and tells her about Henry's dead…

“Bella, Henry was died”

“Yes, I know about that…”

“How did you know?”

“All in newspaper and television's news talk about him..”

“The CID thought, you are the killer…”

“What?”

“Yeah…they thought you killed him. But….”

“What?? They thought it was me? How can I kill the one that I love so much.. I’m so regret with what I’ve done to him. He decided to leave home. I don’t even have chance to say sorry to him. (Bella crying a lot)

“Be patient, Bella. The CID just curious about you.”

“Are you telling them that I’m his wife?”

“No…I know you don’t want anyone know about your marriage and I’m sure you never thought to kill your own husband. But, seems like they already get that information. I’m not telling them more. I know Bella, you still sad with this…don’t cry, we just hand this case to CID to investigate the killer of your husband”

Bella just cry and she cannot say any other words. She was very shock when she knows that the CID blamed her as the killer. In the same time, Alexander is coming toward them.

“Hey Angela?”. Alex’s eyes point on Bella.

Bella looking down and covering her face

“Hey Alex..”

“Who is her?”. Alex ask with slowly tone.

“Ohh… by the way, this is Bella…my friend and also Henry’s friend”

“Bella? Are she is okay? Why did you cry Bella?”

“I’m okay…Ah Angela, I think I should go now”

“But Bella…..”. Angela not able to continues her words.

“Hey…. wait! Why? You felt uncomfortable with me?”. Alex asks for sure.

Yeah, Bella actually felt so uncomfortable because Alexander keeps looking at her… Then, she decided to go home first.

“No, I just need to go home now, I’ll see you later Angela.. Take care”. She tries to hide what exactly she felt.

“Wait!.....”. Alex still try to stop her.

But, Bella just left….

“Hey Angela, what's wrong with her?”. Alex still curious.

“Maybe, because you are ugly…that's why she run. Haha”

“That must something…”

“Whatever! I have works to do…bye”

“Hey!! You also run from me. What is my false today?”

At home, Alexander was always thinking about Bella… he got a strange feeling towards her.

SCENE 8

After a few days, Alexander meets with Angela.

“Hello Alex?”

“Hi, Angela…. I want to ask you something”

“About what?”

“Where is Bella’s home?”

“Why? You want to meet her? Haha she doesn't like you at all… she still can't forget about what was happen to Henry”

“So, then…I’ll try to cheer her up”. Alex makes a wink.

“Haha...stop nonsense…”

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Suddenly, Inspector Bryan appears in front of them…

“Angela, can you bring us to Bella's house?”. Ask Inspector Bryan.

“What? For what??”

“The hair that left at Henry's shirt in the kills incidents is matching to her..”

“What? No!! Bella can’t be the killer!!

“What is that mean Sir?”. Alex interrupts.

“That's means…..We've to investigate it. We must get Bella to ensure the killer.

“Are you saying that Bella is the killer?? What is this?”. Angela unsatisfied with

“Let's go to her house to find out the truth…”. Said Inspector Bryan briefly.

SCENE 9

The three of them was going to Bella's house. As they arrived, they tell Bella and want to gets her DNA.

“Can I check your hair?”. Order Inspector Bryan.

“For what?”. Bella try to avoid it.

“We just need to prove it”

“Prove what? You still think it was me?”

“That is because the hair that left in Henry's shirt on the incidents has DNA data which is matching with your profile. We have to arrest you to make investigation. Please give your corporation”

Alexander and Angela just watch what the CID do to Bella without saying anything…

The detective brings Bella and arrests her until the investigation done. She just follows the detective without saying anything while her tear goes out.

“I’m sorry Bella. They order me to find you. But, I believe the truth from you”. Angela whispered softly to Bella.

SCENE 10

At the laboratory… suddenly, Inspector Catrina realizes something…

“Inspector Bryan, Come here!!! Look at this result”. She is showing up the result of Bella’s DNA)

“What? You have found out something interesting?”. Inspector Bryan focuses on the computer screen.

“Yes.. Her hair DNA is not match with the killer’s hair… but, the profile photo at this computer data is same with her, but the name in this profile is Victoria Anderson. That is means, Bella have a twin”

Inspector Bryan can’t believe with the result. He go to the place where Bella was arrest and brings her to interrogation room. Inspector Catrina is following him from the back.

SCENE 11

In the interrogation room.

“Bella…tell me, did you have a twin?”. Inspector Bryan starts to ask a question.

“Yes….”. Said Bella.

“Checkmate!!!!”. Inspector Bryan patted the table.

“Where is her right now?”. Inspector Catrina’s turn to ask.

“I don’t know for sure?”

“Now we got a new suspect”

“But why?? She does not even know about Henry”.

“But we just found her DNA on the Henry’s clothe”.

“What? How can?”

“We have to find her immediately. You don’t really know where she lives now?”

“Last time I meet her, she stayed in Australia. She love to travel and we rarely meet”

“It seems so difficult to get the detail. Oh Bryan, you have a great job to do”. Inspector Bryan talk to himself and quite stress with this complicated situation.

“Ok, Inspector Bryan.. Just keep calm. I think this case is not too complicated. We can find it. We have to start find out more data about this twin”.

“I'm not the killer Sir. Please bring me out from here”

“I know Bella but hold on. We still need your help to get information about your twin. I hope for your corporation.

SCENE 12

Then, Inspector Bryan and Inspector Catrina go back to the laboratory to find out more data, which can help them in that investigation.

After a few minutes,

“Inspector Bryan, you need to see what I found at his neck..”. She makes a check on Henry’s dead body)

“What is that?”. He walks towards Inspector Catrina.

“There is an impression of latex”.

“That’s means, the killer was strangle him by using a rubber gloves”

“Exactly!”

“But, I wonder, If the killer is a women. How can she fight with this man? Look at his body, its quiet strong and possible to hit her”

“Refer to his hand and the Chloroform in his body, I think… he was pass out by the Chloroform and the girl tied his hand”. Inspector Catrina make an explanation.

“So, she might hit him while his hand is tied?”

“Yes…but she also hit him after he realize from faint”

“Too much cruel…”

“Yeah…”

“So, what about the latex?”. Inspector Bryan asked.

“I thought we have to go ask Bella any information to make strong evidences”.

SCENE 13

Inspector Catrina go asking some questions to Bella.

“Bella, can you tell me anything about your sister?”

“It’s been a long time we never meet each other but a few month ago, I’ve contact her via e-mail because I don’t have her current phone number. She said that, she stay at Australia for a long time because she already has a new job.

“What kind of job?”

“She’s a surgeon”

“Oh, ok…I think it’s enough for today”

“So, I will be liberated?”

“Yes…but we still need information from you. Tell me if she have contact with you”

“I will and I hope you can find out the real killer of my husband”

“Ok, I’m sorry for what was happen. Don’t worry…we will find the killer immediately”

From now, Bella is out from the detention. She decided to not have meet with all of her friends because she just needs times to forget about the cruel tragedy of Henry’s death.

SCENE 14

Inspector Catrina go back to the laboratory to tell Inspector Bryan what is playing in her mind.

“Inspector Bryan, I think you should know about this”. She suddenly opens the laboratory’s door.

“What’s going on?”

“Refer to what she said, her sister is surgeon and, as a surgeon, what do you think they will use in surgery?”

“Knife, cutter, dissecting scissor, scalpel handle…and others. Why did you ask?”

“Haissshh, why you can’t guess it? The doctor use robber gloves in surgery. So, I’m pretty sure it is can be the evidence that Bella’s sister is the killer”

“Ouhh…I got it”

It is being in silent situation for a while.

“Catrina….do you need some food? I want to go out”.

“Oh, nevermind, I’m still full. Just go by yourself.…I need to find out more about Victoria Anderson. I think she is interesting.

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Inspector Catrina still in the laboratory…

She struggle to find out more about Victoria and keep investigate Henry’s dead body to find any other proves.

After a few minutes later, Inspector Catrina saw some blood at Henry’s nail. She looks careful and realizes it, there is no injury at his nail. She thought that blood might belong with the killer. Inspector Catrina immediately takes the sample of the blood and start to check the DNA.

While she identify the blood DNA, Inspector Bryan comes and go towards her.

“Hey…what are you doing?”. He asked.

“I just found this blood at his nail but there are no injuries on it”

“You already got the result?”

“Not yet…”. She keeps focus on the microscope.

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Inspector Bryan goes to check the dead body.

“The killer is so cruel…I still thinking about the reason why she killed him”

“It’s maybe because of grudge. I guess”

“So pity him…”

“Inspector Bryan, come here…look at this”. She is showing the data at the computer.

“Did you got it?”

“Yeah.. The owner of this blood is Victoria Anderson. She is truly a Bella’s sister”

“Haaaa, finally, that is enough evidence. We’ve to tell five-o to find her”

“Hey!! You think we live in Hawaii?”. She is knocking Inspector Bryan’s head

“Then, tell the CSI…”

“Inspector Bryan, please be serious. We are CID not CSI”

“Yeah!! I’m just kidding. I know…it is my job, I know what should I do.”

“I’m sure, she still in this country”

“I will track down the suspects via the email address used”

SCENE 15

Next day..

Alexander met Bella on the home. But he felt that Bella was changed. Bella looks so different in her style. Actually she is Victoria, Bella's twin sister who disguised as Bella.

“Hi Bella.. can’t expect to meet you here”

“Hi….”. Victoria felt awkward.

“Glad to know that you already free from detention? Errrr…Did you cut your hair?”. Alex try to find a topic.

“Detention? Free? But you are….?”

“Don’t you remember me? I’m Alex….”

Victoria shock when she hear about the words “free from detention”. She bravely to show up just because she know that her twin sister was blamed as the killer but she don’t  know that Bella already free from detention.

“Oh yeah….I remember”. She nodded even she actually don’t know him.

“Did you want to go somewhere?”. Alex asked a question again.

“Yes….I’m….ahhh! I’m looking for my puppy…yes my puppy”. She is grinning awkwardly.

Alexander felt something is going on. She was changes a lot and Alex can feels that she is not Bella that he knows.

“Bella…”

“What??”

“Not…nothing…Emmm, maybe I can help you to find your puppy?”

Victoria started to afraid if Alex already reorganises her.

“No, It’s okay….I can find it by myself”

Victoria goes immediately to avoid her identity revealed.

SCENE 16

In the night, at Alexander‘s home.

Alexander is watching television at 7 pm.

Suddenly, he heard something fall at the kitchen. He stands up from the sofa and go to the kitchen to find out what happened there. He turns on the lump and he saw there is few sands near the sink and pan fall on the floor.

“It must be rat. Ish!!”. Alex talks by himself.

Suddenly, someone touch his shoulder and try to put handkerchief to cover his mouth. (The handkerchief has Chloroform on it, which can make someone pass off)

The unknown people wearing a black jacket and cover up his/her face. It is hard to identify whether that invader is men or women.

The stranger failed to put that handkerchief at Alexander’s mouth when Alexander pushed down the handkerchief from him/her.

Then, the stranger push Alexander to the wall and Alexander’s head is banging on the wall then he fell down. Alexander trying to stand up but the stranger tramples his knees down and makes him scream out. After that, the stranger strangles Alexander and at the same time, Inspector Catrina and Inspector Bryan come to Alexander’s house as he was contact them to discuss about something that happened early afternoon.

Inspector Catrina knocking the door but nobody open the door even she can see from the window, the television still turn on.

Suddenly, they heard Alexander’s scream out.

“Alexander! Alexander! Please open the door”

Inspector Bryan pushes the door, then, the door opened. The stranger keeps strangles Alexander while he struggles to stops the stranger.

“Put your hands up!!”. He points the gun on the stranger.

“Who are you? Let him go!!”. Inspector Catrina gives instruction.

“haahahahah no Bella here?”

Inspector Bryan shoots the floor. Then, the stranger stops strangling Alexander. Alexander gasps for air and hold his neck that still felt hurt.

“From your voice I know you’re women! Now, open your mask!”. Inspector Catrina order her to open her mask.

“Haha…I just forget to bring my gun. I think it easy to kill this stupid”. She laughs.

“Stop nonsense!! Give up now…”

“Oh, but I felt something in my back pocket”

“Don’t waste our time”

“I also don’t want to waste my time”. She put out her gun and shoots Alexander’s arm.

Inspector Bryan quickly shoots her hand and legs. Then, her gun fell down. Inspector Catrina move the gun far from her. The floor is full with blood. Inspector Catrina call an ambulance to save Alexander.

Inspector Bryan immediately opens the stranger’s mask while she is writhing in pain.

They were shock when they know that the stranger is Victoria.

“Why you do all this Victoria?”

“Why CID is always smart”. She smirked.

“Victoria, you already killed someone and we’ve to arrest you”.

Victoria faint because she lost so many blood.

SCENE 17

Next days after Victoria recover from her injury. CID teams bring her to the police station and arrests her until she gets fine from court.

At the police station…

“Why did you kills Henry?”. Inspector Bryan asked to ensure the reason of murder.

“Because I want to”. Said Victoria.

“Stop fooling us!”. Inspector Catrina starts to get mad with her.

“I hate him!!”. Victoria continues her words.

“Why? You know she is Bella’s husband?”

“Can you see the different between me and Bella? Why did Henry choose Bella? I have done everything for him…but why he still loves her? Why Bella must get everything I don’t?

“You are really crazy…”

“Yes I’m…I’m so crazy on him….I was pretend to be Bella to approach him without he realizes it. But why he never see me? Why?”

“It’s too much Victoria….but still, killing is not an option”. Inspector Catrina upset with the reason that given by Victoria.

Suddenly, a member of the CID enter the interrogation room and told that they can't contact Bella and from the information, her friends said they never met Bella since she was free from detention a few days ago.

The situation became a little anxious.

“Gathered all the members, go get Bella now!! Faster!!”. Inspector Bryan gave strict instructions to his team members.

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“You did something to Bella?”. Inspector Catrina asked Victoria seriously.

Victoria suddenly silent and she just ignore that question.

“I’m asking you! Answer me!!”. Inspector Catrina again with her question with high pitch.

“Hah..”. Victoria smirked

“Don’t fooling us!!”.

“Yes…I killed her. She must be happy get to meet Henry again”

“Are you crazy? Where is her?”

“Hah, alright….I’ll end this game because I was satisfied”

“Tell us!! Where is her?”

“I put her dead body at my house. I know it was cruel to kill my own sibling. But, my heart was full with hate than love since she steals all my happiness. Huh! That fool girl…I killed her before I come to Alexander’s house”

Inspector Bryan pulls Victoria’s collar and almost wants to hit her but it stopped by Inspector Catrina.

“Don’t do that Inspector….We must do in professionally”.

“What’s time is now? I’m sure she already felt how bad I suffer when she steals my happiness”

Inspector Bryan immediately calls the forensic department, ask them to come to the crime scene and check the dead body of Bella.

“Victoria!! Tell me the place!!

Finally, Victoria gives her home address…….

Then, all the member of CI go to Victoria’s house and they have found Bella's dead body in the store. Bella was shot by gun with 8 bullet in her body, her face was slashed, her both thumbs had been cut, and there is serious injuries on her internal organs, and there are cracks in his left rib. It is the second cruel murder done by Victoria.

COURT DECISSION : “Victoria you are found guilty of cruel murder of two innocent people and the attempted murder of civilians”

Victoria will facing with heavy fine. She will be imprisoned for five years and will face the death sentence.

The news of the murder spread across the country and all the people questioned why she is willing to kills her own blood sibling just because of jealousy.

During the five years she imprisoned, Victoria has suffered emotional distress.

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